tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5347463840298564760.post5216646090175082537..comments2023-09-22T02:08:55.225-07:00Comments on Paddle California: Who wants to learn something?Bryant Burkhardthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14962650670783506022noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5347463840298564760.post-35661169669023662122010-07-19T09:48:55.121-07:002010-07-19T09:48:55.121-07:00Bryant - bow's the article coming along?
If...Bryant - bow's the article coming along? <br /><br />If you use the composite photo showing the yellow boat entering the current, it may be good to add an arrow showing the current direction. And maybe a line showing where the eddy line is. Perhaps 2 copies of the same photo - one unmarked and the other marked up with current direction, eddyine, etc.<br /><br />Maybe in the first paragraph ("many options for paddlers in any boats", add a sentence that talks about how eddys can be used (spot to rest, eddy hopping to move upstream against current, etc.).<br /><br />Reminder - deadline is coming up...<br /><br />PeterCalifornia Kayaker Magazinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01263443398462972771noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5347463840298564760.post-55895455401804617922010-06-13T11:00:54.710-07:002010-06-13T11:00:54.710-07:00Bryant - A couple of things kind of jumped out at ...Bryant - A couple of things kind of jumped out at me. You may be planning to use illustrations for these, but you might want to explain the physical act of edging in a little more detail. A true beginner may be left scratcing his head. Also, a little more description of the entry angle when you first mention it. It sounds (to me, anyway) like one is to paddle into the current at at 12 o'clock position. Beyond these quibbles, it's clear and very readable. Good job!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com